Wow, totally blew me away, great fic, really, really liked it! The first time I've read a Dean/Neal story and I loved it. Really liked the ending as well, you put thought into the story, really liked that.
The only thing I'd like to point out as a little criticism was the repetition of the names, you sometimes had Neal or Dean twice in a sentence and that was a bit distracting. And there was a bit of tense mixing. Hope you don't mind for me pointing that out!
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Date: 2010-09-26 08:50 pm (UTC)Really liked the ending as well, you put thought into the story, really liked that.
The only thing I'd like to point out as a little criticism was the repetition of the names, you sometimes had Neal or Dean twice in a sentence and that was a bit distracting. And there was a bit of tense mixing. Hope you don't mind for me pointing that out!
But a really, really great story!